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Review by Overlord
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I liked the word play a lot but sometimes the actual medical terms seemed like like something the main character would not really sy given his audience. However overall I liked it a lot. I think that you should write more stories like this one. I'll be sure to recommend it to others.


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