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Review of Bloodball  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is very good. I like how you blend what is happening and his thoughts, which together combines into whatever Markus will do. The only thing that I don't understand in this story is if Markus dies in the end or not. ' "It" didn't ' is a very good ending, but it leaves with questions. It's very right you leave the reader with questions, in my opinion, but does Markus die or not? Just intrested.
Maria
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