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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very nice visuals I could see the destruction. I think Eris can make a very interesting character and am interested to see what trials she will have to overcome, be them internal or external. There was one sentence that needs to be fixed
"Then why are asking me to hunt them down?" I believe you were going to say "why are you asking me".
Keep it up I look forward to continue reading it.
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