Thank you for the read. To be honest this was hard for me to follow. But I do know that without God there is no salvation. Thanks again, I did enjoy the read. I would like to understand it better, maybe you could enlighten me! Keep writing
Deep and emotional. The not knowing is always a comfort, we can live free in our own minds for a little longer. Sometimes its hard to come to terms what's really happening to ourselves or the ones we love... that's when we reach for something bigger than us to get us through.
This is well written and it hits me deeply. I still feel lost at times with an invisible force trying to pull me down every time I try come up. Its a daily battle with me but I can tell you the light prevails always. Excellent read!
This poem touches me so deeply. It pretty much describes my life, how I felt up until recently. Up until recently I was sure I was born of the Devil, from the moment my mother gave birth, my life was nothing but trauma, pain, and more pain. But I realize it was all needed to get me to where I am today. Your words tell a story that I know many people can relate to...excellent portray of how most feel inside. Thanks again for this..
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