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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a darling story you tell Mr Ron/Mango 🥭! Your grammar is perfect too, for there are no typos!

You have been blessed with a safe and happy home. You're a very handsome kitty and do look like a mango!

In a world with so much bad news, it's refreshing to read about something inspiring.
Our kitties Maxy and MoJo may write their own story
Thanks 😻


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You show deep meaning in your words using simplicity.
In an old grammar book by Stark and White, it says " omit needless words!"
You did this well and made your points 😁.
I didn't find any typos either!
Welcome to WDC and write on.


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Review of Unanchored.  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My dear thanks for sharing these heartfelt moments of your lovely Gracie 🌹💞.
I believe in the rainbow 🌈 bridge 🌉 where the pet 🐶 children of ours are happy and wait for us.
I didn't see any typos or anything.
I'm touched by the expression of your experience and can totally relate being in the same situations over the years.
Take 💜 heart they are always with us in spirit.
Hugs 🤗


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I found this an interesting post 😁! Your descriptions of China and life there were very informative and enjoyable to read! It would help if you used more spacing between paragraphs to make it easier to read. Besides that, it was a good read, and hope you will be writing more on your experiences!


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Review of Community Service  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A lovely piece for the class assignment! You did a very expressive job of showing ( not telling) about Joey's embarrassment and other emotions. The storyline was interesting and engaging. The environment and the residents are spot-on. ( As one who has been a Nurse assistant and volunteer.)
It was an enjoyable read with a charming ending!
Write ✍️ on indeed 😁!


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Bless all involved for making this a beautiful remembrance space and allowing people who would never benefit from reading these special authors a chance to experience the words they chose to ✍️. Because it exists they can still live on to inspire others like myself.
(I pray when my time comes, to be remembered in this way)
Thanks to all who maintain this sacred space. I will make it a favorite to visit and understand these folks. Bright Blessing's to all and God G-d bless you.
🕯️🌹💐🦋🌻🕯️💗🎶
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Review of Blog @ Work  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi there was looking around for special things to review and found your awesome blog! It was very welcoming upon my first glance and it was fun, interesting and inspiring as well. You tackle many subjects in your posts. I'm glad an angel gave you an upgrade because you really put it to good use! I saw a video link you shared and I saved your blog to my color notes 🎶 app, so can follow your journey as well!
Didn't find any typos or " Sp's" which is spelling errors! Years ago my English teacher ( rest his soul) would write SP in red and my sister and I would tease back saying Sspp!
Anyway have a safe blessed day and keep Writing On indeed 😁!
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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow I started at the end and will have to start at one, besides that am glad this entry was the one I started with! You wrote with a lot of passion for writing and besides the only 4 misspelled words ( you did give us a heads-up about letting the writing flow and editing later! In Steven King's book " On Writing" When you write, write
When you edit, edit. True words 😉!)
You put so much energy into this teaching piece. There's good pointers on the process of writing and also your day to day descriptions of how to handle distractions, which as you truthfully put can't always be ignored. Looking forward to reading more of this!
Thanks for representing us disABILITY writers and bringing Awareness!
Write ✍️ on indeed!!!


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I admire your courage in sharing what you went through. I'm praying 🙏 as am writing this will have a blessed ending.
You have a very unique style of writing with is so real and down to earth. Will keep reading as it so matters to know you are ok, after all you've been through. And how you didn't back down!!! Happy Ground hogs day ( which led me here!)


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved reading this! Adorable yet good thought provoking... I'm going to share it with others. You hit the nail right on the head!
The truth he tells is so simple and how many ever get it?
It was told well and far as I can see,no misspelled words.
Will be checking out your other works. Write ✍️ on indeed!


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You have written the beginning of a tale that sounds intriguing indeed! The cast of characters seems like an interesting mix!
The premise holds a lot of charm and possiblity. I was all ready to dig in but there was something missing. The story to come. Hoping you will write more of it. Enjoyed being drawn in! Blessing's!


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is an awesome and beautiful well written slice of true life. Your descriptions are spot on! ( as a former C.N.A who also worked with many types of client's as these and the elderly, Indeed we do it for love.) I hope those who will find comfort in reading this and those who would benefit by learning from it will take the time to. There are so many misconceptions about mental illness. It has always been my prayer that people would do more research to see that not all are harmful. Many are good kind people trying to escape the prison of their personal labyrinth and live a normal life. Thanks for writing this and letting me share it! Oh no typo issues!
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Review of Windbreaker  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sage needed a capital but I really enjoyed reading this and the imagery.
I would have liked a second stanza to continue your short "adventure".
Standing alone as it is, it works. Showing the contrast of " the barren trees" against the serenity of sage.


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Review of The Change  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very moving piece and using the viewpoint of the deer fits perfectly.(As one who lived many years in Oregon and saw the changes there to nature...)
Your imagery is spot on and even one who has never been so close to nature can understand this story. And I would hope feel it in their heart, as I have. Write on you have a blessed beautiful gift! Thanks for writing this.


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Review of Dogpack Handle  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I sometimes wondered why you chose the name "Dogpack". After reading this inspired article about the why's and the sharing of your experience and writers soul I feel blessed to know you, even more! It's written from your heart and soul. You have an important mission and hoping more people will learn from you ❤️🕯️. And become more inspired as I have today 😊! Bless you always.
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Review of Customer Care.  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
OMG 😳 I loved your take on customer service and your attitude! I feel like you were taking about my life!
I sent this to my sister to read,as we are going through the same situations!
You are very consise and described your experience with great with and humor! Glad I dropped by and will again. Write on indeed 😊!


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Review of Lily of My Heart  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your an amazing woman with so much talent! I just read this and have learned so much about the world you grew up in and the loving family who encouraged you to write on!You have a way with words indeed 🤠. I've been away from writing and it's very refreshing to find inspiration in it. I've been struggling with my own challenges ( am I too old to continue?)
You have a good spark of light 🕯️ that's what this world really needs!
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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I came in not realizing it's chapter 3! Your character drew me in.
It was a good read with real life details and a lot of spirit! The conversation made clear sense and showed instead of just telling what was going on and in her head. Looking forward to reading more of your writing ☺️!


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very powerful in visuals and thought of the unending flow of life. Your words are concise and flow!
I see no way to improve this lest you make it longer.
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Review of Robert  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this inspired retelling of a true story. It explains in part the why's of Jewish beliefs to someone who may not even know about it. It shows by having patience we discover good things about another and can be an inspiration for them and others. I hope you return to continue writing indeed 😊🙏🕯️🕯️!
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Review of Center stage  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
It didn't take long to understand the feelings of your humanity behind the frame. Beyond the stage we play/live our choices to continue another episode. I can sooo relate to the truth behind the words. Bless you for caring enough to share your moods and heart. As one who wore my Scrubs proudly many moons ago. You keep telling it like it is! The spacing needs a bit of work for reading better for some.
Write on and welcome indeed!
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Review of On the Last Day  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow this totally blew me away!
After hearing that song in the challenge amazing what folks are bringing to this table indeed.
So much attention in detail and plot. A stunning array of words and meanings looped into a telling tale of future yet present of what the collective mind is dealing with.
The end ( Though wanting to see more!)
Was amazing and put collective prayers in one focus hope.
Loved the line about (... dotted with distant stars)
Thanks for sharing this! Zei gezunt be well.
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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi I saved this to review and after many tries(My family keeps me very busy),finally finished reading. I wish you would finish this! It is a good story,a few grammar issues,nothing that bad! IF you do reply,I will reread it and show where the few things were. It is a beautiful story,That I pray gets an ending as well!
Zei Gezunt,be well!


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Review of Lizard?  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very cute and engage the reader in a perspective of creative thought!
Smooth punchline!
Didn't see any error.


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Review of What can they do?  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This asks many profound questions, one's that should have answers.
Some see this and turn away, some are good soldier's giving time, to cook or contribute in whatever way they can. Many have little themselves and know how it feels to live and deal with life in this reality.
Your writing is strong.
You cut to the chase.
Letting one know how strong you feel and the frustration behind this condition becoming worse as each day turns to night. I applaud you for having empathy in world with not enough.


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