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Review of The Troll Wife  
Review by Adam
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I liked this it was entertaining. I love the descriptions of the trolls, they flowed very well and gave perfect imagery. I think the only thing I would have changed is to have gone more in depth about the main character Will. He barely has a personality and he feels like more of a stranger then any of the other characters. I like the end when Odora convinced her Mother he would be a good husband I didn't expect that little twist. Good job.
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