This poem will touch many whom can relate and there is a clear message that the victim is still affected by the voices in their head from the Bully. I hope there is a healing for the writer by expressing their experience. I liked the fact that the victim gets to stand up strong at one point and say NO MORE. A story is told within the poem of how the writer is aware of the impact the bully has made on her longterm mind state. Interesting read.
A lovely poem! You must not stop writing, you are sending a clear 'love' message to someone. The poem flows and I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing. I am sure no one here will be harsh and I hope any advise more experienced writers give you, will encourage you to continue.
I chose to 'review' this item as I often ponder the same question, 'why is it people ask what you do?' Your have written a great article ( I am very new to reviewing so I have no idea how, so will say just a little to gain experience if you don't mind) I like your outlook and enjoyed reading your experiences, what an interesting resume you have! I agree with your sentiments, we are all a product of our experiences, environment and we are all unique.
A story of romance, love felt and love lost. I am sorry your marriage didn't work out and that Steve refused treatment offerings. Your writing is poetic and dreamy, I felt your pain, healing and acceptance. It is a short story and left me feeling I wanted to know more.
This item gives an insightful glimpse of what life is like for you and other 'homeless'. It is easy to read, to the point and thought provoking. Thank you.
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