Wonderful poem, it describes the feeling that come with searching for love so very well...I look forward to reading more of your work soon... Write on...
This piece never ceases to amaze me. It always brings tears to my eyes and compassion to my heart. It also shows the depths of your talent. Write on...
Wow, what a very well written story. It ended very sadly but did bring out the point all parents feel that we would gladly give up our lives to save our children. You did a wonderful job making us care about the characters and get to know them. You helped make us feel his pain, to know what was going on in his mind. You developed his character extremely well. I look forward to reading more of you stuff in the future. Write On... :)
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