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Review by DTKinetic
Rated: E | (4.0)
Haha, this was a fun read! I like how Janice participates in the end. I could see them getting in pun-arguments in other everyday scenarios (at the restaurant, gift shopping, getting ready for work etc.)
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Review by DTKinetic
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like the dialogue in this piece, sounded like an authentic pirate! I think the punchline could have been stronger though. I think if would save the reveal if the pirate was confused about what caused the holes in the leg.
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