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Review by Pen
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem has some strong ideas - well done. You use 'show don't tell' very well to explain your situation in the poem, and the symbolism behind the poem is very good. You use good language choices and powerful words, and create some excellent imagery. In the poem you come back to the idea of the camper, and I think that is well done. The only constructive criticism I have is that some lines are a little long, although it only has a minor effect on the poem. Great job!
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