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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I like where you are going here. I can feel the emotion behind your words and what you are trying to convey. My advice - clean it up some. Fix the spelling and grammatical errors, make clear line breaks. That would make it easier to read and flow better so that your overall point hits home harder.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautifully written, a job well done. It inspires emotion and patriotism while keeping things real and down to earth.
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