I lost my Dad 10 years ago to cancer and my Mother about 6 years ago and I miss them both terribly. my Dad had cancer and Mom to natural causes. now its me and my three siblings turns. Makes me sad. You did a great job on this poem. I didn't see any mistakes here so I plan to rate it 5 stars and know that I enjoyed your work.
I love this poem. You did a wonderful job on this piece of work. strangely it describes me perfectly. I have been saying I'm not old for years but I know I'm getting there. So I can relate to your poem from experience. and love every bit of it.The idea and the words are all very good. No misspelling or mistakes. Great job you got my attention and held it to the very end.
I need an upgrade on my account I have quite a few gps from reviewing can you tell me what it would cost in gps to pay for an upgrade that is what I have been saving them for and how to post to pay for it. pl/z help i just dont understand it. thank you all!
This is too short to write much so I'm just going to write the review. I think you did a good job, I can feel the emotion in this,sadness and pain. I liked it and hope you keep on writing cause I think you did well writing this. Great job and Keep On Writing.
Good story. you did really well on this.and you are so understanding to this the feelings show through it got my interest and held it to the end. you have put a lot of time into this, piece of work. Wonderful writing and a joy to read. Let me know if you write more to the story I would like to see the ending. Keep on Writing!.
You did a great job on this short poem.I didn't see any misspellings or left out punctuation. The thoughts are good and well thought out. the poem flows thru keeping my attention to the end. Great work! I enjoyed this very much. Good writing, Keep on Writing!
The rhymes in it make it flow nicely and I love the poetry that you wrote.I have children and I have had all those feeling about all of t hem. You did well putting those feelings into words.I didn't see any capitalization mistakes nor punctuation problems. Also your writing is well thought out a well put together. So over all good work and keep on writing!
That was very creepy. It hit my mind like a full blown BLAST.My nerves seemed to jerk my mind straight up. That is a wonderful play on horror Why didn't you tell us what made you want to go there? and what happened when you woke up? That is a well written piece.Keep on Writing!
Strange but interesting.I liked it in a spooky sort of way. I cant say a lot about it cause poetry is not really my strong point. I like to read it but couldn't write it if my life depended on it. But no misspelling or punctuation so I think its good. Keep on writing!
That is short and sweet. I liked it. I enjoyed it You did well in the writing, I'm not good at poetry but I love to read it. I wish I could write poetry like that but I think Yours is very good and well check back to read more if thats okay. Good luck on your writing.
This is so good. You did so well on that.It's all true too I guess I'm in the last two parts now.HAHA!I really enjoyed that and it left me with a smile which is what I hope you were aiming for.Good job I hope you keep rolling those out I'm sure the world is going to need some laughter as these hard times get harder. Great work.Congradulations!
That is a thriller of the worst kind makes you not want to blink or stop reading in any way. preferably not even slow down.You did really well on that piece. I loved it but I like scary stuff to read. You keep on writing like that and I will check back again to read more,
Interesting story. I liked it, it took me a minute to get into it but once I started reading and it filled out and got better. I did not have a problem staying involved until the very last where the story of the boy and his friends changed to his mother. Did the mother die? Who was the girl at the first. I'm a little confused but you have a good story just could use a little refining to get the rest into place I saw a couple of small errors that I think you just over looked. Keep on writing.
That is wonderful. I loved it, it held my attention I was sitting on the edge of my chair waiting t o see what was going to happen next. That is a well done piece of work. Are you going toto write more to it I would like to finish reading the rest of the story if that is ok. I didnt see any problems withthe writing or spelling or even punctuation, just the story you wrote.
I would suggest "Exercise With A Twist." It is very good I loved it Mirrowed my thoughts exactly, I think it is well written and covered the subject. I love to read Protry but cannot write it .You hang in there and50 GPs I will be looking for more of your work. L am going to give you 50 GPs and good luck. Mamaw Elaine
I enjoyed the story in this. It made me feel sad for all the characters involved, but seemed all being friends, were loyal to what they believed in. But you did well in your writing.
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