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Review by Ellen
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey i really like it. I think that even if using no punctuation, or very little, is supposed to be "bad" and "sloppy" the lack of commas really brings out your writing style.
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Review by Ellen
Rated: E | (4.5)
Woah. This is a great poem. I can tell that you have a personal connection with this. This is a great piece of writing, I think you have talent.
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