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Review by Forgotten Flower
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! This is really heartbreaking. It's a short little poem and I have never been in a breakup before, but it still made me want to cry a little. I think it was the melancholy sound of the poem that added to the saddening mood. Im sorry about your breakup Miranda!
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Review of MY LOVE  
Review by Forgotten Flower
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my! This is really clever. I haven't seen poem written like this before.
This is a really beautiful poem for your wife Mr. BusmanPoet! 38 valentines is a lot. You guys must be great for each other!
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Review of Li'l Spidey  
Review by Forgotten Flower
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awww...what a cute li'l spidey! I actually have spiderwebs all over my house because I don't want to upset the spiders and they come after me.

I really like the rhyming. I like it when poems rhyme. And the poem also made me laugh out loud. I can see this as being a short animation!

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