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Rated: E | (4.5)
I absolutely loved this!
The refrain was my favorite. It was short and to the point. I liked the form because it made the song sound much better (in my head) than the standard ones I hear today. It had a nice rhythm , and the rhyming was great, just at the right places.
Overall, it was beautiful. Keep it up!
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