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Review of Wishful Thinking  
Review by LHM84
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this!! Would make a great full length novel idea too...just a thought!!
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Review of The Last Vistor  
Review by LHM84
Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved this, the pace was great as it really made you feel that he was slowing down as he came to the end of his journey
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Review by LHM84
Rated: E | (4.5)
Really enjoyed this great rythym and pace as well as a great sentiment
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Review of Orange  
Review by LHM84
Rated: E | (4.0)
I couldn't see where it was going and that just made the end better- well done!!
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Review by LHM84
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I loved this story, it was very fast paced and really heartwarming. I loved how you felt that Stephen really was at peace and that Bethany could move on with her life. The only tip I could give you would be to write more!! This is a great story but broken down into more description about events could also make a great novel? Good Luck....
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Review of A Memoir  
Review by LHM84
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Justin, I really liked your memoir. It is a little hard to understand as is seems to just be an excerpt but I think that your descriptions and narrative is lovely. Good Luck with it!
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