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Review of Gray Day  
Review by Haley Smith
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is an extremely powerful and beautiful poem. Might I suggest submitting this to poetry contests where you can make money off of this mind-blowing piece?! It is so sad but still bittersweet. I really enjoyed reading this, and that last line just hits me in the heart (but in a great way, don't worry!). Please don't give up writing, don't ever stop! I can't wait to read any more of what you've got to offer.

Write on!

-Haley
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Review of Masquerade  
Review by Haley Smith
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Shelai:

Although there are only just a FEW grammatical and spelling errors, they did not distract me from this chapter whatsoever. As soon as I read the first line, I was hooked. This is extremely well-written, and the way you wrote it to fit Elizabeth's thinking into the mindset of that time period was just awesome. I really would love to see more of what you have to offer. Seriously, this is one of my favorite things I've ever found on this website!

Write on girl!

-Haley
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