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Review by Joy
Rated: E | (3.0)
I liked your writing. It's interesting and I liked the beginning because it a sense of a flowing story to it. I've a few questions, though. Who or what is Marta? At the end, what do you mean by, "The blood flowed through the tube as it entered the clock" part? The storie's great, though. Thanks!
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