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Review of Wild Cards  
Review by express
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Item # 2028051
Review of: Wild Cards [13+]
By: Insane
Review By: express

Your descriptions are very good. I enjoyed reading Wild Cards very much.
No grammatical errors or misspellings.

Your shocker made me jump.

A train is a excellent setting for a thriller, mystery o fiction.
express


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.0)
Item: 2026266
Review of: Information
Overload [E]
By: kingalex1234
Review by: express


Nice article on too much information. NO misspellings or grammatical errors.
Keep Writing!
Keep Writing!
My favorite aspect of your article is your expression of information overload.
express


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Review of Success  
Review by express
Rated: E | (5.0)
Review of: Item # 1747051
Success [E]
by: dean
Review by:


I enjoyed your article very much.

No grammatical errors or typographical mistakes.

Your article flowed well and held my interest.

Keep Writing!

The Tucked was a great car! The public was not ready for it yet.

Keep Writing!

express


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Review by express
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Item # 2033112
Review of : Displacement Nes Garrow - intro [13+]
By:Pseudonymous BN
Review By: express

I enjoyed reading your story.
Favorite: Let your imagination tell the tale!
No grammatical errors or typographical mistakes.
Keep Writing!
Very well written.

express


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Item # 2024760
Review of: Be Original, Make Things Happen [E]
By: express


I like the topic originality.
Keep Writing!
When you refer to someone who is original try to note what their specific invention or accomplishment is.We all need to be ourselves.
Keep Writing!
No misspellings or typographical errors.


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Review by express
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Item # 2031108
Review of: Frames Per Second, Part 1 [18+]

Review by: express

I like part 1 and look forward to part 2.

Keep Writing!

Good descriptions!
My favorite aspect is reactions described in detail.

I noticed no grammatical or misspellings.


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.0)
Item# 2027858
Review of: Short forms ~ Attitude [E]
by : Prashant Pandey
Review by: express
Read your writing to make sure you are using the correct tense of a word.
Keep Writing!
Keep Writing!
Your article is very nice. Sometimes the abbreviations used on social media are difficult to understand.


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Review by express
Rated: E | (3.5)
Item# 2027485
Review of: Press Release New York [E]
By: joe joe
Review by: express

Nice Press Release!
Your Press Release makes me hungry for a good burger! Which is just what a Press Release should do!
Keep Writing!
Suggestion: The Kitchen Kings are Introducing a new kitchen appliance.


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Review of Tea  
Review by express
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Item # 2026703
Tea [13+]
By: Samurai Fuey
Review by: express


Keep Writing!
Keep Writing! I enjoyed you article. Your description of elderly confusion is very good.
I noticed no spelling errors.
I am a little disappointed. I was waiting for her guests to arrive.


express


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Item # 1909581
Review of : The Words We Never Say [E]
By: Angels in my Ear's Auction
Review by: express

I like your poem very much!

KEEP WRITING!

There are many things better left not said or written down.
You expertly conveyed the pain of not being able to write something to someone else.
Keep Writing!
Review by: Express


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Review of We the Readers  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Item# 2025102
Review of: We, the Reader [E]
by: Tab
Review by: express

I like this poem. A interesting poem.
Keep Writing!
I liked your usage of old English.
Keep Writing!
I did not see any grammatical or spelling errors.
Keep Writing!

express

A challenge indeed.


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Review of Longacre Square  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Item # 2024506
Review of: Longacre Square [E]
by: Mac1
Review by: express

No misspellings or grammatical errors.
Interesting and imaginative.
Keep Writing! A very interesting setting; busy and chaotic but relaxing. I enjoyed reading your imaginative article.


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Review of Angel's Blood  
Review by express
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Review of Item # 2003431
Angels Blood [E]
By: Taylor
Review by: express

Keep Writing!
My favorite part; reading through old journals. A very nice touch.Your story is unique. Nice Story! I did not see any errors in grammar or spelling.I enjoyed reading your story.


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Review by express
Rated: E | (5.0)
Item # 1359260
Review of: Hannah's Christmas Gift [E]
By: Harry
Review By : express

Heartwarming!
Keep Writing!
My favorite aspect is the way you crafted the Depression era into the story.
I did not see any grammatical errors. Hannah's character is easy to relate to.


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Review of The Hapless King  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.0)
The Hapless King [E]
A different take on King Arthur and the sword and the stone.
By: hawkmoth
Item # 2001685
Review By: express

My favorite is your ability to describe the King's inner struggle.
I did not observe any errors.
I enjoyed reading your story. Please Keep Writing!

express


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Review of Bird  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.0)
Item # 2019940
Review of: Bird [E]
By: DavidEhrgott
Review By: express

Thanks for your refreshing Thanksgiving poem.
I enjoyed the read.
Keep Writing!Some of your poem did not make sense to me. However that is your creative option.
I enjoyed your poem.
express


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Review of Secrets  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.0)
Review of Item # 2002314
Secrets
By: vmc_4
Review By: express

Review of: Secrets [E]

A very nice poem. Secrets can be very complex.
Keep Writing!
I did not see any grammatical errors.
Secrets needs to be more upbeat. Overall I enjoyed your poem very much.

express


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Review of: Demon Queen Chapter 2 Coronation
By: anawa kazuki
Item # 2021308
Review by: express

I really like this Chapter 2. Excellent descriptions!Example: When Violet's eyes and hair turned colors.

Your writing is presented in a clear and logical manner. Th flow of your words is well crafted.
Keep Writing!

express


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Review of In Rome in1965  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Item # 2016041
Review of: In Rome in 1965
By: Handle
Review By: express

Keep Writing!


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Item # 2019987
Review of: What is considered success? [E]
By: Survivor48

Review by: express
I liked your free verse about success.
I did not notice any grammatical errors or inaccuracies .
I would like to have see a longer poem.
Keep Writing! Keep Writing! Well written!


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Review of I Love You  
Review by express
Rated: E | (4.0)
Review of: I Love You
Item # tackle l: akakapo
Review by: express

Your poem is short and sweet. I enjoyed reading.it very much.

Keep Writing!
I takes two to love. Simple yet, expressed in a clear precise way. Love is a difficult subject to tackle.


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Review of: The Colorless
By: Necrowrith
Item # 2001543
Review By: express

I liked "The Colorless" very much! It is well written. You captured the pain the artist must be it very well.That is my favorite aspect of your story.
Keep Writing!
I did not see any typographical mistakes.
Keep Writing!
express


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Review of Autumn  
Review by express
Rated: E | (5.0)
Review of Item # 1955225
Autumn (E)
Poem entry for The Writing Muscle Stretch
By: Carly - doing JuNoWriMo
Review by: express

I enjoyed you poem very much! Your descriptions are breathtaking. Keep Writing!
I did not see any grammatical or typographical mistakes.
I think your poem could be a little longer.
Autumn is very well written. Your poetry is an inspiration to me!
Keep Writing!

express


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Review of: Diamond in The Rough [E]
A poem written back when I was a teenager.
By: Fancy
Item # 1224851
Review by: express

I enjoyed your poem very much! I like the use of simple language to describe a teenager's thoughts.
Keep Writing!
I did not see any grammatical errors.
There is a nice rhythmic pattern to your poem.
You captured a teenager's blossoming into a women beautifully.
I would like to see this poem a little bit longer.
Keep Writing!
express


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Review by express
Rated: E | (4.5)
Review of: The Luck of the Irish (E)
By: RubyRedDragon
Item # 1977606
Review By: express


I enjoyed your story!
Keep Writing!
Your story reminded me to be proud of my Irish heritage. Also, even today we need to enjoy life's simple pleasures.
My favorite aspect of the "Luck of the Irish" is that it is full of love for life.
Your story flowed naturally.I think your story is well written. I did not see any grammatical or typographical errors. I would have liked to see a more detailed character sketch of both James and Lana. Overall your story is excellent! Keep Writing!
express


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