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Review of The Cleansing  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello Rjsimonson

My Thoughts: This is a beautiful poem. I wanted to read it multiple times to make sure I appreciated it fully.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the uneven stanzas. The poem just flowed that way. I felt it added to the poem.

My Suggestions: I don't have any comments for improving this poem. It looks finished to me.

Final Thoughts: I found this by using the random review option. I enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of the task  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Hello Rhyssa

My Thoughts: This is a lovely poem in all lowercase. Somehow all lowercase fits this poem as it flows across the page.

My Favorite Part: My favotite part was the thirty poems in thirty days. That sounds like a fun thing to do with friends, even though it's difficult to do.

My Suggestions: I can't find a thing I don't like about this poem. Please continue with your poetry.

Final Thoughts: I found this by using the random review option I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)


Hello Littlekelly

My Thoughts: This is a beautiful poem. I feel like you're doing honor to someone with this poem.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the glowing theme of possitiveness running throughout this poem. It feels uplifting and cheered me up this morning.

My Suggestions: I think you are using your instead of you're. I found it in three places, you're humble, you're kind, you're ruled.

I think you used whose when you meant who's earth bound.

Final Thoughts: I found this by using the random review option. I hope you continue writing poems. This is lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.0)


Hello Kelly

My Thoughts: This is a cute story. It was well thought out and the loose ends seemed to be tied up.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the gift from an active grandpa to his grandson. That was nice.

My Suggestions: This is a good story, but it feels a little stiff. It's hard to put my finger on it. It feels more like technical or formula writing that is a little rough on the edges. It's still a worthwhile story, though.

Final Thoughts: I found this story by using the random review option. I enjoyed reading this story. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Pinup Girls  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.5)


Hello Joe

My Thoughts: This is a very different thing to write about. It's very interesting.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is saying she's a streetwalker, but not a whore. That was very interesting.

My Suggestions: I guess I just wanted her portrayed in a more positive light. It's all up to you, though.

Final Thoughts: I found this by using the random review option. I enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of WIP - Althea  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)


Hello Lotleth

My Thoughts: This is a very interesting look at a job interview. It looked at the concept in a way I haven't seen before this.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the talk of the sexual tension in the relationship. I think it gave a different color to the story.

My Suggestions: Maybe I got lost, but I wasn't sure how the vampire angle fit into the story.

Final Thoughts: I found this story by using the random review option. I enjoyed reading this tiny story. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


Hello Harry

My Thoughts: This story/poem feels like a limerick of some kind. It took me a little bit to get the hang of the rhythm, but then I was off and running.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that there were actually people in the woods. That's an interesting add.

My Suggestions: I know there are things done to keep the rhythm, but it was a little hard to understand at times, but overall it played very well.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this piece. It had a sing song quality to it. I found this by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Blurred Truth  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello Fyndorian

My Thoughts: This is a beautiful picture painted with words

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the descriptions of the butterfly/aura of fae.

My Suggestions: I have no suggestions.

Final Thoughts: I found this piece by using the random review option. I enjoyed it very much. It cheered me up to have such beautiful descriptions dance before my eyes. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello Keaton

My Thoughts: This is the second of your poems I've run into today. I think you're an outstanding poet.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the end about death waiting.

My Suggestions: I was wondering why death happened by it just being near. Maybe I just didn't understand how the death was happening.

Final Thoughts: My think you should continue with this world class poetry. You are just really good. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)


Hello Princess Megan Rose

My Thoughts: I really liked this piece. It gave me a warm fuzzy feeling.

My Favorite Part: I think the graphics added at the end of the piece helped make the whole item more meaningful.

My Suggestions: You used more than one way to handle the puntuation for the dialogue. I didn't know if this was intentional or not.

Final Thoughts: This is a warm, cheery piece for the holidays. I liked reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello The Vu

My Thoughts: This is a great story with a fitting ending with a warning. I was dragged through this story. I just had to finish it.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the warning at the end to not mess with the devil. I think that's a great way to end this story.

My Suggestions: I found a lot of nits. I know commas can be up to the disgression of the author, but I'm going to toss out what I was taught - court, so - worry, the - up, his - John, but - insisted, so - die, then - treatment, John - drivers, knowing - cars, but.

The word the seems to be missing in to the devil.

Missing a period - company. He.

The word will is capitalized twice and I believe they should be lowercase.

An apostrophe s seems to be missing in car's place.

I believe in formalized writing, the smaller numbers should be spelled out - 6 months - 6th month - 2 doctors.

Missing a comma - said, "You.

I think you're missing the word he in and he would.

Final Thoughts: Please continue writing. You have talent. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Vampire's love  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Liliy

My Thoughts: I really like this tiny story. It sounds like a lead in to a longer story or series of stories. You have a big enough idea for a novel here.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is being this way and living out in the open with people. That's a great concept.

My Suggestions: I found a list of nits. Try adding a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier to read the story.

I think pain full should be painfil.

I wonder if torched look was supposed to be tortured look.

It looks like a missing letter in f my victims. I think it's supposed to be of.

You're missing a comma - said, "You.

Another missing comma - again, though.

Another missing comma - love, Peter.

I think he destiny is supposed to be my destiny.

Capitalize I.

Separate the name with commas - me, Lucia Gilbert, and.

Final Thoughts: I truly enjoyed this piece. I hope you continue writing. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Pensive

My Thoughts: This is such a touching story. I truly enjoyed reading it.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the magnetic letters. Helping kids with reading and writing at such a young age is so very important.

My Suggestions: Oh just keep writing way cool stories.

Final Thoughts: I remember my mom was so happy to turn my room into a study when I left for college. I know there are people who keep their children's rooms enshrined. To each his own, I guess. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Dottie

My Thoughts: This is so fantastic. What a great present from your niece. You're so lucky.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the cat looks like a grumpy cat and a cat model for cat food.

My Suggestions: Keep that niece around. She's great.

Final Thoughts: Thanks for cheering me up today. This is a wonderful sig.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Prosperous Snow

My Thoughts: I really liked this poem. Las Vegas is a very busy tourist spot and tourists are a different animal.

My Favorite Part: I really liked the compare and contrast between the locals and the tourists. It reminded me of my time living in South Lake Tahoe on the California side. It really is like mixing with a different kind of people who don't understand the area. I hear you about the heating bills.

My Suggestions: I think I found a missing comma, but I forgot to write it down. Sorry about that. This is very well done.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed this trip back to my years living in a tourist town. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello J'nell

My Thoughts: This is a strong and positive piece. I think it's very encouraging.

My Favorite Part: I like how you want to find the good in everything, even in the roadblocks in life. That's wonderful.

My Suggestions: Continue your fight to stay positive. It feels like writing is very healing for you.

Final Thoughts: This piece really cheered me up. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello J'nell

My Thoughts: This such a touching story you wrote for your daughter. It shows how much you care.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that she shouldn't take this one failure as a reason to stop. I liked how encouraging this piece is.

My Suggestions: It looks like you were trying to keep to a pattern of four line stanzas, except for the beginning and end. I wasn't sure if that was intentional or not. It might be better as all four line stanzas, but the choice is yours. Your in the end should be you're.

Final Thoughts: I just really liked this. It is so nice to see someone care so much for her daughter that a poem was created. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Man behind the pen

My Thoughts: This is a cute little tale. Of course it could grow up to be a great big tale, but I really like it as is.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the detail of the two tailed character. It made me wonder how else that could be used. It made the story more interesting.

My Suggestions: There are two places in the dialogue tags where upper case is used and it should be lowercase. One needs a period changed to a comma. I had an issue with knock out gas being injected. Knock out gas should be inhaled and how would that work? Maybe that detail could be reworked.

Final Thoughts: This could work as a series of tiny stories or added to to make one large story. Either way, I really like it. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Withdrawal  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Maria

My Thoughts: This is an interesting piece of writing with personal issues showing through. You are exposing yourself to the world and it helps people understand the situation.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is that your family does care enough to get educated and this could possibly make your life better with more support.

My Suggestions: My suggestion is to continue writing from the heart. It seems like writing therapy works for you and making it public could possibly help others.

Final Thoughts: I like that you're opening up about things. Perhaps after writing about things for a while, you might start to find patterns in your bahavior that could be underlying issues for you so that it might be easier to address the real issues causing other issues. I hope I'm not talking in circles. Take care and thanks for sharing.

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Review of Starbucks  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Maryann

My Thoughts: I like that you commemorated your first visit with a poem.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is that it's better than the kitchen coffee. This helps explain their popularity and prices.

My Suggestions: I have no suggestions.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this fun and light poem. It was also nice that you made a listing of your favorite parts of your portfolio. That's how I found this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Web Witch

My Thoughts: This is an interesting and educational piece of writing with a wikipedia entry for background.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the snow on the trees like a well tailored shirt. I imagined the tree as a man tryy wearing his shirt of snow colored cotton.

My Suggestions: Continue writing poems like this to remind you of parts of your life. I felt the sadness about missing these little birds.

Final Thoughts: I really enjoyed this writing and finding out juncos go all the way to the arctic was great. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Earth Science  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Earthenware Haven

My Thoughts: I didn't realize this was a puzzle when I first opened it. So this is fun.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the Geology theme. I used to be a cabin leader at an outdoor science school and I got to lead the geology hike, so the words are mostly familiar to me.

My Suggestions: There is a word missing in the opening to the puzzle. Likely become should be likely to become.

Final Thoughts: I think everyone can enjoy a word search. Thanks for the trip down memory lane with this puzzle. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of No Time To Scream  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello Angus

My Thoughts: This is very gruesome. It gives a feel of what's going on from different perspectives.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that the person who called the cops was targeted. He should have known better.

My Suggestions: I wished there was more of an explanation of why he was in such a bad condition and had to have more fat. I didn't understand the situation, unless maybe he's homeless.

Final Thoughts: Thanks for sharing this different piece of writing.

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Review of My Master  
Review by Janine
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
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Hello Sinbad

My Thoughts: This is an interesting look at a way to live a life. It sounds good.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is liberty leading to love. I really like that freedom brings love. It just feels good.

My Suggestions: I don't understand our us right near the beginning. I can't tell if it's a typo or just a phrase I don't understand.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed the thoughts this piece of writing evokes. Keep working on it and possibly add to it to flesh it out. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of High anxiety  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Drifter

My Thoughts: I was interested to read about the stress of preparing a sermon, as I know nothing about it.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the micro managing check list of to-do items. I agree this is something that works well in many situations.

My Suggestions: There were a few spots that felt like they needed rewording, lile where you mention micro managing. But I felt the overall intent was to write the anxiety out of you, so this was probably not your main focus.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading what you had to say about the preparation needed for your speaking engagement, which could be another way to describe your event. Thanks for sharing.

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