This poem reminds me of what it felt like searching for love. We always create the perfect image of a mate in our minds. This poem, to me, represents what it feels like to fall in love with that perfect image. This poem is deep and moving. I almost feel a sadness and frustration for the subject. Nice prose with a great emotional undertone. I enjoyed this piece!
Wow! This was amazing! I really enjoyed this. Your writing just seems to pull me in! Your attention to detail is beautiful. I really cannot find anything I do not like about this wonderful story! Wouldn't it be nice if this could really happen? You are a great writer Megan!
Wow! You have touched upon so many important aspects of finding happiness. Thank you for the reminder! Too many people have forgotten that life is all about the small moments of life. You brought these to the surface spark the memory of real happiness. You did a nice job of giving examples of what happiness is not. I love the detail about people looking for happiness in illicit activities that actually destroy happiness. In all honesty, even though I liked the idea of googling lottery nightmares, which I will now, I feel it may have taken the reader too far away from the main idea of happiness. This is just my opinion. I do like that you backed your concepts with facts. This essay is a nice read with a very important message. To add to this, you might discuss how real happiness comes from within yourself. I really liked this essay! Nice work!
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