this piece is... i just have three words "everyone suffers same" and your piece just is for someone who is going through a problem, break ups or just feeling blue! And that is pretty much everyone, so great writing, keep it up & all the best.
This is amazing great short piece, writing something without a start and end and still it has every ingredient of a good piece of writing. I would love to read more:)
wow!!i have a high respect for poetry writers and i should tell you this is awesome.You have taken such a touchy topic described it in simple reality with beautiful words!i have read many poems but there are some which touch the heart yours was one of them,i would realy like to chat with you for an insight in poetry writing,this really touched me.
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