tbh, I think this piece of writing is well written, I love how you picked the right words, the more complex to use words. it seems as if you have a great poteintial to become an actual writer,you know the famous kind. why not keep writing this kind of stuff, keep it up, youre doing very well, I enjoy reading your writing. (0u0)
after reading this, I believe in angels more than ever. there is no need for improvement. this poem is beautiful just the way it is... keep up the amazing talent!
I love this poem... you really put a life's story into it. I think this is so amazing and is worth sharing through some sort of poetry magazine... I love the way you put everything in order and find a way to make the ending of each line rhyme, like a usual poet would do.... you are what a true poet is... your talent is clear here... keep it up! this is amazing... I can't even find any other words to describe this. mesmerizing, wonderful, astonishing, jaw-dropping, eye-popping... I love it!
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