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Review by jenjenta
Rated: E | (2.0)
Hello, thank you for allowing me to review your item.

I started off liking this with the first sentence because I thought you were going to explain why "we live in a universe that can be seen and experienced from many different perspectives".

There seems to be a few random big words thrown in that only sometimes fit, but I get the gist of what you're going for.

I had to look up the word omnicentric. Apparently the dictionary hasn't caught up to that word yet. Then I tried 'multiperspectival' and unfortunately that didn't provide much, besides a reference to multiperspectivalism (which seems to be a religious movement?).

In the end, I wasn't able to really discern what you going for. It feels like a philosophy statement but there wasn't anything involved that taught something new.
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Review by jenjenta
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can review this as an article, because I'm in Ohio and those pests have been invading my house for the last three years!!!! Every time I try to open up my screen door, there's one of them trying to get in.

But I don't know a whole lot about free verse. I will say that it read very, very well. "Kudzu" bugs is a new thing for me, but after I looked it up I understood. I understood your pain, and the fear of the "plague of stink bugs" was established so well. Considering that you wrote this 7 years ago, I'm thinking that more people should have paid attention!

From my understanding of "poetry" (which I have never been good at, or understood that well), I am happy to give you a five star review. Even if I'd never had to deal with stink bugs, I would have thoroughly understood what you meant. Great job!


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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Review by jenjenta
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey all, I'm essentially new... It's been 15 years since I was here. I'm happy to be back, but I could use some help with formatting. I feel dumb about it, but apparently you can't copy and paste from Word and expect it to show up as it should!
I am probably not posting this in the proper forum, and I'm sorry for that, but I couldn't find a FAQ for that sort of thing. I just need some pointers on where to find the link to the formatting language used here. Thanks in advance for any help!
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