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Review by nutation
Rated: E | (1.5)
Interesting, sounds to me like the eulogy of a dieing seaman.


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Review of Dear Me  
Review by nutation
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this letter, I have thought about what I would say to my younger self many times, even if I would tell myself about critical things to come. Its was very refreshing to read and it made me laugh, I liked this a lot.


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Review of Until Death . . .  
Review by nutation
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I had to come back and finish reading this story because I can relate to many of the issues this young person has been thru, all I can say is by the grace of God go I, and I beleive that is the main point. Not having someone to teach morales and no religious foundation one is left to the imagination of their own base nature which I beleive will ultimately lead to distruction. I feel sorry for this person but we all have to answer for our deeds. A good story, well writen.


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Review of Until Death . . .  
Review by nutation
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Reading this chapter of the writers tale took my mind in the direction of not being judgemental, but relating to what she is saying eventhough I sence that she is trying to draw out simpathy for her actions that may follow. I can relate to everything she is saying, the low self estem, wanting to be accepted, the drugs and alcohol abuse, and especially the self distructive behaviour, but it seem that crossroad for this person was being seperated from her religious sect and the family abuse. Maybe if the writer would have had a chance in either instance she would have taken another path? But the sad truth is "hind sight is 20/20 vision, and the best we can do as humans is not make excuse, forgive ourselfs and move on. If one doesn't learn from their mistake they are destined to repeat that mistake.


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