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Rated: E | (3.0)
I especially like the the idea of presenting various points of view from different people. It would help to identify the various persons by writing (wife), (husband), etc. next to their names.

At the conclusion, going to Mamma Mai's house seems to be a metaphor for passing on, which makes it quite beautiful.
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