Wow! That was an amazing adventure. Frankly, I wouldn't have noticed the contest objects in the story if it were not bold. The plot is so nicely woven around them. The dialogues are crisp and it moves the story to its destination. The suspense was very nice and I enjoyed the ending.
I believe getting a feedback itself is a big credit for me as a writer. It is probably a matter of perspective that one might or might not agree with the other point of view. At least you get to know another point of view.
Keep reading and sharing your feedback. I'm inspired by this post of yours and that's what worked for me.
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