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Review by CeeJayee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Honest sharing of someone in pain, or understanding of the pain a person battling themself goes through. I understand that pain & experience it more often than not, myself. I think it is strong of you to share. I understand the feeling of people judging something they do not know, or understand, or, chose not to.

I hope that you are okay & I hope that writing helps you to share & express the feelings inside yourself. Even if you don't share that writing publicly. I have written a bit on a piece called "Never Enough" & indirectly, this is the feelings I tried to share in that writing.
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Review by CeeJayee
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting!! I don't think I would have thought of this & it's very interesting!

And actually, it has made me think of all the time that I have wasted, that I could have been actually DOING some writing & I have not. I wonder now though, do many writers go through a period like that? or do some people "just write"? Do you write a lot?

I find this very thought provoking & thank you for sharing it!
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Review of Kevin 1967-1983  
Review by CeeJayee
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
What a touching story about your friend! Losing a friend, especially in our teen years is very hard. I think that we all think as teenagers that we are "invincible" ... though, I don't really remember "Thinking" that, so much as "living" that ... I am sorry for the loss of your friend! I think that it is an emotional & important thing for you to have written it down & shared this with the writing community!
Wishing you the best! ~~ Tara
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Review by CeeJayee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What an emotional, honest writing! I feel the emotion you have written this with ... I will look forward to reading more of your work. It's amazing when we look back, how fast time has gone by ...
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Review of Friendships Lost  
Review by CeeJayee
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so beautiful & painful!! Such truth!! I really like this, although it is so very sad!!
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Review by CeeJayee
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your story!! I also had a head injury - mine was in high school, at about 16 though & I have suffered from migraines, headaches, head pains, all head pain since :( At times its crippling & I have a migraine for weeks on end. I was on meds & I have given up finding anything that works :(

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Review of Blackout  
Review by CeeJayee
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Interesting!
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Review of Grid Ride  
Review by CeeJayee
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found your writing very interesting. And, to be honest, it really made me think back to when I was younger - things I've done, time that has gone by. I hope you have written more, as I look forward to reading it!
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Review by CeeJayee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading another section about Kerk & Marli! I think you are a very great & creative writer! I hope that there is more/will be more about Kerk & Marli! I am reall enjoying these stories! I hope that you are pursuing your writing as you are an awesome writer! I will be looking at more of you work!! Great job!!!

I am looking forward to hopefully another section that will continue on with the information that Kerk has learned from the dr - about Shamans using the gyromitrin derivative ;)


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of The Better Half  
Review by CeeJayee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this! you're a very creative writing:)
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Review of Designated Driver  
Review by CeeJayee
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
:) Creative!

I like that its stated that she made a responsible choice, if she had went to the bar with her friends;)
However, I get the impression reading on, that she did something else with her car to get that little red convertible;) I like stories that make you think!!!:)
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Review of Waiting for Dawn  
Review by CeeJayee
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great story! Very creative!
I like how the story comes together - the friend thinking the other was just bluffing because he often said he didn't feel well when he was scared.
I like how the "angel" came & started talking to the children & helped them to realize what really happened. Poor kids! Great story though!!
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