I love how you put this story together, it makes it feel real while I am reading it. I was hung on every sentance. You know now days there are a bunch more people that believe in the paranormal, and there are a bunch more that would do crazy things like this. I really enjoyed this story it was well written. Thank you and God bless you and yours.
Beautiful poem, takes me back to my childhood in Germany and New Jersey. Thank you for that, I love when a persons words can take me away from the everyday. I really love it. May God bless you and yours
I have to say I love this. I most certainly will not ever look at doing the dishes the same way anymore. I am actually inspired to clean the dishes, something I would never say. I do not like cleaning dishes! Anyways have a great day and God bless you and yours.
I really hate those knocks on the doors and we cant get the dogs to shut up! I really like the way you write. I really have nothing to critique, it is very well writtin. Thank you very much, and is the story out if so please let me know
It is very sad to say but I have been there myself and it is hard to let go especially when it is most important to leave the situation. Great job on this story of yours, it was great to read it and reflect on the past. I thankfully have gotten away from all that crap. I hope this story is not based on true events. Thank you and God bless you and yours
This is a great story it is sad and some unexpected turns are there but you did a really wonderful job. Thank you and God bless you and yours. I really do not want to know how she feels about her parents death. I personally do not know what I will do when my mom dies. My dad an I were not close but it still hurt like hell when he went home. Again thank you.
This is a great story and I love how it really makes sense on how life really is. This is a spiritually uplifting story and I thank you very much My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
This made tears come to my eyes. It is a very uplifting poem from mother to child. The only thing I found to critique is that you mispelled: from and begin. Beautiful poetry thank you very much. god bless you and yours.
Great poem. I really like it. It is not very often that i see poetry that has to do with the love that God and Jesus have for us. Thank you very much and may God bless you and yours.
I love it. Great job. For a little bit I thought that it would go one way, then it went completely different way altogether. Anyways it is a really great poem. Thank you very much. God bless you and yours.
Great job. This poem is really great. It keeps you in suspence as well as makes you think. I truly believe you could write a book and sell it too. Thank you and God bless you and yours.
This is a well written poem.I really like what this poem is saying. I can sadly say I have met to many ravens, that are dove's. Thank you and God bless you and yours
Wow, great poem. I really enjoyed it and it is something I feel for the man I love too. This would be a great one to put on cards for anniversaries or valentinesday. God bless have a wonderful day
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