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Review of Life  
Review by Kuujamzs
Rated: E | (3.0)
Andres,

I agree with you. I don't know if you are planning to expand upon this thought but I think there could be serious potential behind this thought. Maybe offer how you arrived at this conclusion and why you think that embracing the changes is the best way to go. I would really look forward to seeing how you expand.

-Jamzs
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Review of The life of a sim  
Review by Kuujamzs
Rated: E | (4.0)
F.T.Cleo,

This is a really interesting poem about the life a Sims character. As players we never really consider what they want, do we? You gave them a very rebellious voice but you were also very careful do not let that voice take away any authority from the player, which is a really nice touch. Have you thought about adding something that connects to their character points that a player must assign them at the beginning of the game? That way you might be able to give the character more depth. Just a thought.

Keep on writing,
-Jamzs
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