Such a beautiful snapshot of your pain! There is a classic line in your poem that should be remembered forever as a true poetic genius..... "Nothing can kill what is already dead"! I will always remember that string of words. So thought provoking and so very real. Your writing touches me. It is sort of like my submission called the Number Zero. I know yoy could relate to it. I love your writing. I have read several!
Kris, let me tell you! That wave to end all waves will be the highlight of your life. All other waves you didn't ride were made for others. The one hig life changing wave for you is on the horizon. i see it building. Enjoy the ride....... Your words werte beautiful.
Such a beautiful description of pain, darkness and despair. Only those who have lived the dark ess have your passion. Hope your passion and beautiful literary skill leads to joy and happiness. You have such a beautifulgift of words...... Thanks for sharing.
Being both a gardener of roses and a true romantic, I read your poem and understood it from many levels. A beautiful poem saying what we all know about love and hope and beauty. I love your style and content.
Wow! I can't even find the words to describe how intensely your story held me captive reaching for every new sentence. I could not help but think that there has to be a link between great emotional baggage and the future onset of cancer. What a horrible secret to carry for all those years. Reading between the lines I almost felt he didn't seek a treatment for the cancer because he felt thst was the punishment he deserved for killing the boy in the alley. And how beautiful and tender it was that his wife didn't reject him at the end. Thst was ALL he had left as he parted with his lufe. That is one story thst I will remember for a very long time. So well written and so captivating!! Thanks for sharing it with the world.
Wow! Every sentence had me begging for more. I was hoping she went to the wrong door or that there was a surprise party or something, anything! Then the reality hit. She had to pay a price for her sins. But an entire romantic interlude was written in a few short paragraphs that showed the ending to someone's world as they knew it. Im glad I read it.............
The words came from your mind dressed with your heart based on your life's personal experiences. How dare the editor strip this word from your passionate soul, or add this word to alter the thoughts that made print. Is that an editor's "job"? Or is it the ego of the smarter on the efforts of the lesser word producers?
Please tell her you want your words back!!! They are yours and in the order you laid them out! You do not need a Dr Kovorkian of words...........
Nicely written, precise and detailed and packed with emotion and meaning. Well stated and equally well written with passion. Life and death is so fragile, and we all know that we are on a timetable of dying from the moment we are born. Death walks hand in hand with us each step of the way. I loved your writing. Keep it going.
Amazing story! My Carolina Panthers were pkaying football now and I am a sports fanatic but could not tear myself away from your beautiful captivating story. Please tell me how to subscribe to all your stories or be alerted to when you write more. Your style was so vivid I could see each detail with clarity! I loved your style and content!
When you try the least and least expect it, the purpose of your life will reveal itself and the person you are destined to be with will find you as you also find that person. Life is funny that way. The person to share your world is walking now, waiting and looking for you. You will meet at exactly the precise time that it is meant for you to meet. Not one second before. Keep walking and keep writing.
So powerful and so real. The greatest pain and curse of life is to outlive your child. Children were never created to be buried. I read your story through watery eyes. Your words floated between despair and hope, sadness and love. I hope this literary work brings peace to you and those who are moved by its poignant words.
Was ready for bed, but too intrigued not to finish. Kept my attention and tweaked my curiosity for Part 2. Did not go in the direction I thought it was going. Perhaps that is why I liked it.
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