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17 Total Reviews Given
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I will be open and honest about my reviews. I will not be rude, or disrespectful. It doesn't matter if you have a degree or not, or if you have been writing for 1 year or 100 years, my reviews are completely based on the way your piece made me feel as well as how much I enjoyed reading it. I am in no way a professional, but reading and writing are my biggest passions and I have been reading for about 20 years ( Dr. Suess still counts as reading!) so I think that makes me an unprofessionally, professional reader right? *GoLucky* Ha! I cannot wait to see what you all have in store for me. So come on, show me what you got!!
I'm good at...
Poetry and short stories.
Favorite Genres
Anything! I like my reading like I like my music; all I need is a good story and a flow that takes me away.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry
I will not review...
Hate speech. Ok so I know I said I like anything but I have seen some poems (not on this site) that are just hateful toward a person or group of people and honestly I want no part of that. I understand it is your way of expression but maybe that's something you should keep to yourself lol! Thank you!
Public Reviews
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Review of Lullaby  
Review by LadyLeo
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this *Heart* I am expecting a baby myself so I really appreciate the inspiration you have for this song, as my own little one has inspired me to write as well.

In your last verse, you wrote "Baby boy, oh, baby boy do not put a fight" I'm wondering if you accidentally forgot to add the word "up" in there? Just so you know, in case you did mean for it to say "do not put up a fight". One other thing is I cannot tell if you were meaning to make this rhyme or not, as some verses follow the rhyming theme, whereas some do not rhyme at all.

That stuff aside though, I really love this lullaby! It is so sweet, and I can feel the love you hold for your baby boy as you wrote it. A mother's love is never ending, and reading this reminded me of how safe and comfortable I have always felt in my mother's arms. I want to sing this to my own baby *Heart*


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Review of Frustration  
Review by LadyLeo
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem hits home for me; I understand the frustration of not being able to help someone you love, because they don't want the help. That's what I gathered from this poem anyway. I hope the person you wrote about got the help they needed. Your work is so simple, yet so elegant. Another piece that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. *HeartP*


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Review of Interloper  
Review by LadyLeo
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem so much! *HeartP* Your words are beautiful, the flow is beautiful, and I personally very much enjoy the subject matter. I realize they are weeds but I think my yard is the most beautiful when there are hundreds of dandelions scattered about. Wonderful work!


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Review of 7-11  
Review by LadyLeo
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh wow thank you so much! *HeartP*
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Review of A Slower Return  
Review by LadyLeo
Rated: E | (5.0)
The symbolism in this poem is on point! I really understood your message here, but these types of poems are my very favorite because not only does the author have their own way of looking at it; but the readers get to experience their own story in the piece as well. What I got out of this poem is a broken heart; someone who was shattered and lost but is just starting to pick up the pieces again and try to find their inner peace. Love this very much, thank you for sharing such a lovely poem. *HeartP*


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Review by LadyLeo
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I am crazy about the imagery here! Bravo! The rhythm and energy in this piece is on point and I enjoyed reading it very much. *Delight* I especially like how you describe the woman in this piece, you give us the details we need to see your vision but you also leave it open enough for our own imagination to decipher as well. Again, bravo!


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Review of When Autumn Comes  
Review by LadyLeo
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem tugged at my heart strings so hard. The imagery is spot on, and the misery is beautifully captured in your lyric. It makes me almost feel guilty for loving the fall season, because you have masterfully captured the unpleasantness you feel when this season rolls around. I applaud you, I hope to one day capture such elegant description in my own work. *HeartP*


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Review of A Warriors Heart  
Review by LadyLeo
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is so beautiful, I can feel the passion and pain in you lyrics. I'm so sorry for your loss but please be proud of yourself for turning such a sad occurrence into something so beautiful; I'm sure your Son would be very proud of you for this. I enjoyed reading it very much, and hope to read more from you.*HeartP*


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