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Review of The Wind  
Review by LauraAnneMarie
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is good, but the first two lines aren't consistent with the 5/7/5 scheme- "wind-is-swir-ling" is only four and "twir-ling-all-a-round-me" is only six.
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Review of Remember  
Review by LauraAnneMarie
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Wow, that's really really emotional and well written! Did you actually experience this? I'm very sorry if you did because this sounds awful, but if you haven't then you have a very vivid and talented imagination!
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Review of Barcelona  
Review by LauraAnneMarie
Rated: E | (5.0)
Another really great poem, Jason :) Really passionate!
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Review of destroying you  
Review by LauraAnneMarie
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow :) Not only am I a HUGE fan of anything to do with Buffy (and Angel, and everyone else haha) this poem is really great.

is it meant to be from angel to buffy, or the other way around?

Really good. Keep writing! :D
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