I love the flow of this story, you fell like (or at least I did) that the story is being sung to you by this man. Your transitions are awsome. Please keep up the good work.
You can truly fell the thoughts and emotions that are described here. It makes really think about what your shadow sees. Good job and keep up the good work.
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