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Review of The Power to Know  
Review by udita
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a good piece of writing. A very simple fact said fantastically. I liked it and personally enjoyed reading it. But somehow I felt the poetry could have been better developed. This felt like a poem because of it's structure but lacked in feeling. Philosophical yes, but somehow a bit distant. Maybe it is because of the subject. But you are the greater judge. And I liked it. Keep writing.
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Review of Time for Goodbyes  
Review by udita
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Relatable as we all have had pets that we had to leave. It's is an emotional tug to our hearts. I had a cat once and then she left me. So this poem is beautiful, comprehensive. I loved it as
I felt this actually serves the purpose of a poem.
A lot of emotions in few words.
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Review of In My Dreams  
Review by udita
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good piece but somehow i feel it needs more work. Perhaps the easy manner and the repetition of 'ok' ..are quite disturbing to me. This could have been better phrased and some other poetic instruments could have been incorporated. Rhythm and rhyme, i don't find, call that my ignorance. If had been rated well then it must be something I'm missing. But very nice nonetheless.
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