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Review by HiDesert
Rated: E | (3.0)
Greetings Blackbeauty,
I’m a Newbie also. I like your image of being as lite as a breeze and passing on to heaven on the wind.
Your reminder of wisdom and truth feels a little awkward. I do believe they go hand and hand, perhaps a separate line for it?
I hope writing.com is a good experience for you.


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