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Review of Favorite music  
Review by Lupin Little
Rated: E | (3.0)
interesting enough poll
must be hard to choose only 6 (as None, All and Other needs to be there)
I might disagree on choices of those six :P but thats a personal thing for me.
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Review by Lupin Little
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
sweet and sad.
I like your descriptive interaction. Very well written and makes a vivid notion of touch.
I can't judge beyond an average reader, though.
But noting jumped out at me as other then good work

I liked it. keep it up, and good luck.
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Review of Champagne Day  
Review by Lupin Little
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was one of the first stories i read in here, that thoroughly made me feel inadequate.
It is so well laid out. making one wish, and not wish to understand them.
Personally i felt the repeating of one sentence was a bit off, but i would give that over to the fact that it's a spoken repetition.

"a name would be mentioned, and the men would stop and take a drink, and sit in dead silence until they could speak again without their voices cracking"
"Someone would say a name and they would become silent, take a drink, and continue once they could without their voices cracking."

And in case you were still wondering. great work! :P
cant wait to see you battle that monster of yours.
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