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Review by lowberryjack
Rated: ASR | (3.5)


Dear Prosperous snow,
What can I say about this ditty. I like it. It's funny in a tongue in cheek way. The poetic license has been taken to the nth degree with that last line. Of course it is a parody of Christmas and there is plenty of room in this world for parody. There should be more of it. We should be laughing more in this messed up world. I certainly laughed at this poem.
Kind Regards,
Lowberry Jack.
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Review of Animal Droppings  
Review by lowberryjack
Rated: E | (4.0)
I loved the description in the story. I felt like I was there. You created strong tension and I felt that you knew or had experienced a combat situation. The bleepers obviously were about as useful as a chocolate teapot .Nice ending. .
Regards,
Lowberry Jack
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