This was... Really strange and interesting to tell the truth, haha. The set up is interesting and so is the story itself though the characters seem to lack depth. It would be really interesting if you added more to it, expanded, if you will. I love the topic though and it has a really creepy atmosphere.
Aww, this was so cute but it also seemed to have sadness laced throughout it. It was unique and a nice, short read that was very poetic and interesting. I love how you wrote it and the words that you used in the poem. Continue to write, you are wonderful at it.
How interesting! I loved the idea behind this and the writing was extremely nice. I've never even thought about writing a story that had cavemen involved in it. How you wrapped it up (the ending) was very creative; most people don't make it where the main character dies and such, though you did such that thing and pulled it off perfectly.
I absolutly love poetry and yours was very nice! The rythm of it is smooth and the way you wrote it made me able to imagine it with pure ease. Please do write more!
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