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Review by MAXINE P. SOSO
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
IF THIS IS TRULY YOUR STORY, I FEEL FOR YOU AND, CONTINUING TO WRITE IT OUT MAY BE GOOD THERAPY TO RELEASE SOME OF THAT INNER HURT. NOW, YOU SHOULD ALWAYS CHECK YOUR WORK FOR CORRECT GRAMMAR, PUNCTUATION AND SO ON BEFORE POSTING. YOU HAVE SOME SENTENCES THAT ARE RUN ON SENTENCES WHEREAS, A COMMA MAY HAVE BEEN NECESSARY, I COULD BE WRONG. THERE ARE ALSO A FEW SENTENCES THAT SEEM TO HAVE TOO MANY COMMAS. MAYBE, YOU SHOULD USE A GRAMMAR CHECK PROGRAM BEFORE POSTING. BUT, I'M TOTALLY FEELING YOUR STORY AND, YOU DID AND OVERALL GREAT JOB.
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Review of The hangman  
Review by MAXINE P. SOSO
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
IT'S SHORT AND, PERFECTLY UNDERSTOOD THE WAY A POEM SHOULD BE.
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Review of Andrew  
Review by MAXINE P. SOSO
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
THIS PIECE IS DEEP AND TRULY INSIGHTFUL. THERE ARE MANY TIMES WHEN LIFE CAN TAKE OVER AND, GET THE BEST OF YOU. BUT, SOMETIMES IT'S JUST TOO LATE. WELL WRITTEN!
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Review by MAXINE P. SOSO
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
These tips have been extremely helpful and insightful.
Each tip was well written and, gave thorough instructions on what should be done in order to gain readers,feedback,exposure,etc.
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