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Review of Fireworks  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh, this is nice, except about your childhood pet.
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Review of Why in the World?  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (4.0)
That actually sounds really interesting. Very Positive view of God.
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Review of White Tiles  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Is this about an Insane Asylum? I was in one for a while?
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Review of Thirty Minutes  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wish I had someone to write poems to or write poems to me?

Wonderful, your partner must be a great person.
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Review of Living With RA  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice but needs more development. Go over your day and what you do throughout.
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Review of Lost in Place  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice, and interesting. I often have random ideas too.
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Review of Silence Is....  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well interesting, but is there a meaning to it, or are you just writing ridiculousness? Don't worry it's good mostly!
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Review of 'Dark money'  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice, article, it takes me back to the day when I was a young political teenager trying to take down Bush (Which was impossible for me to do at that age.)
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Review of Homelessness  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very good, but maybe you should look at the capitalist system as part of the cause for this. I am not a Communist or Anarchist or Nazi, but the middle-way system practiced in Europe is my ideal state.

In my opinion, some things should be free-market-run while other things should be run by the Government only and most things are in between the two extremes.
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Review of YELLOW,  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice, love bumble bees, even though I never see them down here in Florida. Yellow is a very beautiful color, in my opinion, I like using it alongside pink.
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Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (4.0)
It's very good for prayer. As Pagan I write prayers to my own Gods. I unfortunately never really felt anything towards Yahweh. I thought Jesus' story was great, but I decided the same thing as Thomas Jefferson about him.

But the praying is beautiful and wonderous and so was the scripture you choose.

I would say if you ever leave Yahweh, I'd welcome as poet of Odin.
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Review of Story of a Cat  
Review by TheGrayCat
Rated: E | (4.0)
A Cat bringing you dead animals signals they are worried about your protein intake. This poem isn't that original as an overview of cats in general. But it was good. As a lover of cats, I salute you.
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