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Review by megajoe11
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
A lot of potential in this story. There are definitly some notable highlights. But unfortunately all in all there are a lot of short chapters and text blocks (a bit of punctuation would not go a miss).

Personally I find these quite jarring so it sucks me out of the story. If you can deal with it though then have at it.
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Review by megajoe11
Rated: E | (3.0)
Story lines are a bit hit and miss at the moment, but there are some good chapters. There some clever hooks putting a new spin on familiar characters. There are few that seem a bit out of character, but let's not nit pick.

This is one to definitely give a watch for a lighter bit of weighty fun.
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Review by megajoe11
Rated: E | (4.0)
Really nice story so far. The authers so far seem to have maintained a fairly consistant quality of content. So far I have not encountered a single post with one or two sentences.

Also nice to ave a bit variety in the gaining. I think a nice mix of male and female oriented content.

I will definitely be checking back in the future.
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