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Review by Melinda
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice! This is not as easy as you make it look.
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Review by Melinda
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Congratulations. An amazing poem- I found myself hanging on every word..each one perfect for its part. Very powerful. Thank you, Melinda
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Review of OPEN THE WINDOWS  
Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am really enjoying the 'prompt' pieces. Reading them is like watching someone's mind unravel. This piece speaks to me of my experience reading other writers...be open, watch. learn and grow. I like the images 'fresh winds blow' and 'newer thoughts to sprout'. The poem feels light, and refreshing and leaves my mind with the desire to stay open. Thank you. Melinda
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Review of God Is Working  
Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (4.0)
A heartfelt poem. I like how even amidst the pain, there is hope. The reminder to not feel forsaken is a powerful one during the time a loved one is sick. I also was struck by the strong sense of faith. The first stanza especially reminded me of my own experience with my mother. The incredible pain, wanting to shut down, but no time to break apart. I was left with 'All is well'. Thank you.
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Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for these postings. I have written the words that popped into my head for years, never having any understanding of rhyme scheme, syllabic pattern, rhythm and meter. So whatever came out on the page, that was it. I had no idea how to improve upon it. Now I can look at my writings with tools to improve and refine. There is a whole world I have not yet tapped into. I appreciate the path you lay out. Melinda
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Review by Melinda
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Those are the questions and yes, faith is the answer. Thank you for the powerful reminder. Melinda
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Review of Making Maps  
Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you. Hope is priceless.
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Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your work. I was transported to that place and felt a part of your home and sad at the loss. Very powerful piece on change. Happy New Year, Melinda
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Review of I, The Ocean  
Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for the images. I felt for a moment as though I was the ocean. Beautiful. Happy New Year, Melinda
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Review of My Miracle  
Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a beautiful gift to and for your daughter. Your love and gratitude reminds me to not take for granted the blessings in life and to see the miracles. Happy Holidays, Melinda
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Review of A Deafening Hush  
Review by Melinda
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I can feel the deafening hush in my stomach. Although about death, this is a living poem. I can feel it in my being. Thank you.
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Review of Linda's Song  
Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (4.5)
Faith. Thank you
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Review of The Wall  
Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. This speaks volumes to me. A powerful reminder that we can tear down the wall and we don't have to keep pouring cement.
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Review of The Letter  
Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem left me speechless..I could feel every word. Your desire to share with the thief his unknown wealth struck me.
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Review by Melinda
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you. Your poem brought a huge smile to my face. I worked at a children's hospital in the past and children and death has always seemed dark. I am left with a beautiful, happy, image and I believe the children are running heaven. Must be a great place.
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