This was a very well-done poem. It paints a good picture, and makes you think about your main character. I really love how you told the story, and how you painted a picture of your M.C.'s worries, goals and victory. Good job! I can't wait to read another piece by you.
This was an amazing piece, and I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish! I loved how you made me feel as though I was right there, walking through the story along with the other characters! I found your piece in the read a newbie section, and I was so glad I read it. 10/10 would read again.
Nice Pen Name! I can relate wholeheartedly to this poem as no words are 'new' anymore. You don't want to offend anyone. It's like playing a game of dodgeball. I enjoyed your poem, and your pen name will be one I remember!
This was an amazing piece. You captured the feeling of grief and I'm sure that if/when you publish this you will make many people feel better and help people get over losses. I found your piece in the "Review a Newbie" section, and I'm so glad I looked! You have fantastic talent, especially if you just put this piece together. This brightened up my day a tad and I hope that you continue writing this out, or show it to others!
Sincerely,
Messy Bookworm.
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