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Review by Scarlett Golds
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love how you're able to convey the subject of the poem without ever directly stating it! Your word choices very effectively showed the emotions of the narrator. The only small thing I would look at is some word choice from lines 7-9 because the word 'love' becomes a bit repetitive, however, this may have just been a personal thing. Otherwise, very good job.
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