I can say it's one of the most one of a kind poem I have ever read in WDC. Most poems are about, love and heart breaks, but this is the first time I read one that is in Sports genre. As a beginner writer, I have been reviewing and studying other writers' pieces, and this one also caught my eye. I'm not a sports-person myself, but I know how hard and challenging the lives of athletes are. It takes a lot of courage, trust and team work to succeed. I'm always amazed by the idea of overcoming mistakes and loses. It's truly a life lesson.
Wow. This is a very touching poem/lyrics. As a newbie, I have been studying and reviewing different writers' pieces recently, and this one is among the best. Since it's almost Valentines, this is very timely and relevant. I can imagine how you love someone in this song, that wherever you go and no matter what you do, you can't help thinking of that person. It's simple, but it's very true.
Hi. This is awesome. As I said earlier, I'm still struggling to write poems as I keep exploring and exposing myself to different styles in writing poetry. This one's different and has a structure I haven't seen before. The choice of words is also very impressive - it's simple but effective. I think this piece and your works are very powerful as well as helpful to me as a beginner writer.
I've enjoyed it and learned something new. Thank you.
Wow. I understand that the choice of words and getting rid of repetitive words in writing poetry is very important. This poem sounds very elegant and stylish but remains a classic touch. I'm a newbie and I am exploring different styles in writing poetry by different writers, and this piece is one among the best.
As a person who prefers to be alone and I just put my earphones on listening to random mellow songs, I was touched by the words I read. Thank you.
I've always loved how writers choose and come up with amazing words in writing poetry. This is aesthetically and smartly written. I wish I could also write something like this.
I'm a newbie, and I'm exploring different styles in writing these days and every time I see someone's work - it is always different. I'm learning. Thank you.
Wow. This poem is very powerful and deep.
As a newbie, I have been very interested in looking for and reading different styles in writing poetry. Most of the time, I'm amazed by the lexical knowledge of the writer. In this beautiful piece, smartly and carefully chosen simple words can reach people's truest emotions. It's a beautiful poem, ma'am. I salute all the brave men in the world who keep fighting for the name of freedom. I also pray all the soldiers in the Southern Philippines, my country, to be always safe and no more lives to be taken prematurely.
It's very interesting that a brief poem can leave remarkable attention to its readers. As a beginner writer, I've been exploring different styles in poetry and I'm always amazed every time I see a new one but caught my attention by its artistic interpretation - like this.
Sometimes, a poem doesn't need those advanced and challenging lexicons and expressions. A simple one, but it hits you right in the feels. Thank you.
Hi OOT, I'm forever grateful that you've helped me gain confidence, and now I've come this far in trying to make reviews of other writers' pieces. I'm still a beginner writer (I always say that, but I'm getting there okay? ",), and I also hope to explore and learn more in reading other writers' works and at least appreciate by giving my opinion and feedback to their masterpieces. So, with fair and unbiased views, I wish to leave a review for this story of yours.
I watched more movies and TV series than reading books. I know they're two different worlds, but I also learned lots of amazing stories that keeps people remember it for the rest of their lives. I believe this story is movie worthy!
You've structured the ideas and the sequence really well that it was so smooth to read. The reader, or a non-reader would stick with the story until it finishes. It was very compelling and powerful.
I've always loved unpredictable blow of twist and the ending was such remarkable that could haunt the reader's mind and made him think about it more.
It truly inspires me in exploring such genre. Thank you!
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