I like this poem about Today’s Child. The line breaks beautifully. The words are so true that keeps me reading it to the end. Like the lines "They are innocent too in this world
Of chat rooms and people unseen."
Happiness is something that comes from within. No one can make us happy as long as we are able to drive the negative thoughts. Like your write “Happiness is as simple as watching the sun rise or set over a body of water.”
You have written a very good piece of poem from life experience. I liked the way you told the story with beautiful words. I like the emotions evokes in the lines
"A new day arose with her all beauties.
We felt afresh and came back to our home again."
Good poem, I am hypnotized by the words. It's full of rhythm. The words flows musically that pulls the readers to an enchanted nature of Nigeria's heart. The poet has painted a charming poem where the sun's golden fingers caress the leaves, where everything is bright by the radiant light.
All the natural things sings in melodies by the Niger's waters flow.
Good poem and inspirational. I liked the lines "I'll go my own way, stand on my own to, because I can manage."
I think your words need a rhythm to make them flow.
This is really a good poem about mango. It floats beautifully. Its written from personal experience and images. I enjoy your descriptions and the point of view.
I like the story written with the prompt "Creature has secret admirer". Dialogues flowed beautifully. The imaginary of the picture brings life to this story. It's make the story more interesting. It has emotional connection; that makes the children read from beginning to the end.
This is wonderful story written with good points. I like the thoughts embedded in it. I like the line "Then, do not protect your positive, even saintly characters from negative emotions. A highly evolved character will know how to use an antidote to the negativity he or she is feeling, like using love against hatred."
Wonderful poem about a brilliant London-based detective, Holmes. Beautifully told and written and I can relate your story. The tones I find in this poem are rhythmic.
This is a good read. Written with the prompt "THE TV IS BROKEN" for the Flash Fiction. I think your write go with the prompt and you managed very well.
{/b} This is an interesting story. It is full of suspense’s.
I like the way how you wrote this story. Dialogues flowed beautifully between the character Jakoline and Lattan. I like the fonts as well.
There is no description of the events I found. Otherwise it's a good story.
A very good message with an unique concept.You have written a very good piece of poem from life experience. I liked the way you told the story with very clear descriptions and presentation. I like the emotions and the lines
"Sailing with the wind while cresting reckless waves before,
Churning through the white caps leaves you scurrying for more!"
This is a good poem for global temperature. For the past few years many countries weather pattern are changing. Here, In my country for the past few years, the winter chapter is shrinking.
I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I like the simplicity of this poem. My favorite lines "Heat waves blowing
All around the sky
Sunscreen needed
Now it's high time"
I just read this from read and review page. It is a very good message with an unique concept. You have written a very good piece of story. Yes, we all have skills to communicate. You truly said that "waiting your turn to speak, not interrupting, valuing everyone's opinions, and offering your own contributions."
Truly this is a good folklore poem. It creates the story with beautiful images . I like the way you told the story of good descriptions of Erin's spirits. I like the lines "Banshees wait in graveyards
ghosts don't get their kicks."
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