*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/mshilenje
Review Requests: OFF
7 Public Reviews Given
7 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of My Dream  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good poetry. Since this is a poem it would have been good if you made sure the last sentence in every paragraph was the same. It would have helped with the rhythm of your poem and would have put more emphasis on your message


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
2
2
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Your story was brief and to the point. It is as if you were summarizing. Good work


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
3
3
Rated: E | (3.0)
I really did not understand very well your message. I don't know if this was the beginning of your story? I would have to say that I have viewed this as a poem. If you would have written it as a poem it would have been better.Good work.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
3 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/mshilenje