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Review of Samount Gugar v2  
Review by Nadine
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Ahhhh! Time travel! I love the paradox. I was surprised at how this story concluded... therefore, in my opinion, a great read. There was one typo I noticed; in for it, I believe. I need to know why Julie was so calm in seeing + 50 year old August. What did Old August give her (the card)? Also, what kind of story would develop if August could/did keep his promise? This story gave me lots of 'food for thought." Loved it!
(I've just arrived at this so I have few gift points to give.)
Happy Writing!
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