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Review by Nana
Rated: E | (3.5)
There is quite an amount of emotion between these lines, and it is always important that your audience feels what you are trying to convey. Good job. Keep writing! God bless you!
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Review of Off-White Pearls  
Review by Nana
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi :)
Bam! The end was not what I expected. I can empathise with her, and that's important in writing. Good job! God bless you :)
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Review by Nana
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi :)
I was reading this, and my heart caught in my throat. I guess you should base a book on this. Keep writing! God bless you :)
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Review of A Man  
Review by Nana
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi :) Wow, this man...if it's as literal as it appears, I like how you brought out his characteristics..like I feel it. The rhyme is good...I think this is a great piece! Keep writing! God bless you :)
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Review of Final Waters  
Review by Nana
Rated: E | (4.0)
So totally emotional...this is one to draw out everyone who feels something. Great!
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Review by Nana
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi! I love rain, and to be honest, this is a wonderful piece. However, I think you should keep the sentences with some kind of length- what I mean by this is that it should easily be recited at a regular pace so that all the words in the sentence fit into a particular rhythm.
Keep writing!
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